“Coffeeee!! Teaa!!”
“Coffeeee!! Teaa!!”
The vendor called out as he passed the coupe.
“Thuddd!”
The baby fell on its knee trying to walk across to his mother.
The mother ran to pick up the child and is busy placating him.
Ravishing young lady sat across him checking her flock of hair in the mirror of her mini clutch bag.
The chatter from the group of young boys engrossed in a card game relayed from above.
The train had halted at Varnasi for 15 mins. He hadn’t moved or uttered a word from the time he got on.
The newspaper covered Sanjay’s face; his eyes peered through his bi-focal spectacles and his hair rested neatly combed sideways.
A pencil in his hand was losing his grip.
“Coffeeee!! Teaa!!”
The vendor called out as he passed the coupe.
“Thuddd!”
The baby fell on its knee trying to walk across to his mother.
The mother ran to pick up the child and is busy placating him.
Ravishing young lady sat across him checking her flock of hair in the mirror of her mini clutch bag.
The chatter from the group of young boys engrossed in a card game relayed from above.
The train had halted at Varnasi for 15 mins. He hadn’t moved or uttered a word from the time he got on.
The newspaper covered Sanjay’s face; his eyes peered through his bi-focal spectacles and his hair rested neatly combed sideways.
A pencil in his hand was losing his grip.
Since
Sanjay, an engineer by profession proceeding to Kolkata to finalize a huge contract, was lost in thoughts trying to decipher the
doodle he had scribbled on the newspaper unconsciously consisting of few random
numbers and sketches earlier during the morning. He was suddenly jolted out of
his thoughts by loud cheers of boy’s playing cards on the upper berth and then
he noticed the child had come up to him and was eyeing the pencil. Sanjay gave
the pencil and the news paper to the child for to scribble and the child went
back and squatted between his mother and the ravishing girl on the opposite berth.
It was then he noticed her beauty and sub consciously started to groom himself
and was somehow desperate to initiate a conversation with this girl for she was
the kind of girl he was looking to marry for last couple of years.
A
hour later the child became disinterested with the Newspaper and pencil and
suddenly Sanjay hears the girl speaking to him in a cultured tone asking him if
she could borrow the newspaper to which he immediately nodded his head as he
was too shy to answer back. Sanjay closed his eyes and was once again lost in
pleasant thoughts of this beautiful and ravishing girl sitting opposite him,
when he felt tapping of news paper on his body. He opened his eyes to find the
girl was returning the news paper back to him and following conversation took
place
She: You must be an engineer
He: Yes
and how were you able to make out by just reading the Newspaper.
She
with a sensuous smile on her lips replied: Your doodle on the newspaper tells
it all
He:
Really?? You mean that scribbling on the paper tells you of my profession? I am
impressed. But then tell me how you came to that conclusion.
She:
I have done psychology during graduation and I try to gauge various people
around me. Well in your case, for a moment I thought that you are in finance
because of the random numbers you have scribbled all around the sketches but
then the sketches had clear boundaries with intricate patterns in them. Seeing
it for some time made me realize that the sketches looked like some electrical
circuits that I had seen my brother studying few days back and hence I deduced
that you are an engineer. Am I not correct in my statement??
He:
Yes you are correct and by the way my name is Sanjay and I am an electrical
engineer staying at Varanasi and you??
She:
Hello Sanjay my name is Monica and I am also from Varanasi and (pointing to her
brother and his friends on upper berth) said we are going to Kolkata to attend
a wedding of a friend.
He: Oh
is it, well I am also going to Kolkata for a meeting with my client to finalize
a contract and if it is successful then I would be doing the shopping mall
project.
She:
You mean the mall which is coming up near Gol Park? It is adjoining my house
He:
Yes the same one. Now I know where you live Monica and if it is not a problem
can we meet some time for a coffee when you are back from Kolkata.
She:
Yes Sanjay we sure can. Just call me when you are free.
Continuous
conversation gets interrupted by the ticket examiner and after he had gone
Sanjay tries to catch the attention of Monica to continue with their
conversation and get her mobile number but then she is busy chatting with the
boys who have finished their card game and have come down to their seats. He
overhears them talking of taking the return journey by next day morning train
after the wedding as it would be easier to get seats on a day train. He decides
too that he would travel back to Varanasi by the very train they are planning
so that it gives him more time to admire Monica and possibly have a pleasant
conversation with her on boring journey back home.
As
the train is nearing Kolkata there is a rush of daily commuters entering the
coach from the previous coach crowing this coach and Sanjay has not got a
chance to ask for Monica’s mobile number yet and he glimpses her through gaps
in the crowd that she is still occupied in animated conversation with her
brother and his friends. As the commuter throng towards the exit Monica goes
ahead without any backward glance. Sanjay is shattered that he was not able to
get her contact details today itself but then thinks that he would be able to
get the same during the return journey the next day.
Alas
the next day Sanjay searched for Monica on the entire train on the return
journey and she was not aboard the train. With a heavy heart Sanjay takes out
his pencil and starts doodling on the newspaper again lost once again in his thoughts.
This post has been written for Tell a tale contest posted by Divya
My two fellow bloggerTags
Shweta
Ragumuthukumar
My two fellow bloggerTags
Shweta
Ragumuthukumar
Pretty neat way to complete the story!! I will try and take a crack at it too......not sure if I can finish it though!
ReplyDeletevery plausible. One of the few realistic entries to the contest- nice one Engram.
ReplyDeleteHey Ramesh, I did do it...... Check out my imagination here and let me know what you think:
ReplyDeletehttp://muddledup.wordpress.com/2012/01/31/tell-a-tale/
Good one. I know its difficult to finish someone else's creation but you have done a good job :)
ReplyDeleteHey pretty neat.. liked the flow... I too took a shot at Tell-A-Tale... Do check it out...Would be glad to hear from you...
ReplyDeletehttp://vj-ontherun.blogspot.in/2012/01/beginning-of-new-journey.html
A straight forward approach to the storyline. You have captured the real scenes on board well. Good Luck :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments. For fellow bloggers who have sent your links to me for tell a tale i will give feedback on friday as i am traveling. Cheers!!! :)
ReplyDeleteNice one , sir! :)
ReplyDeleteLiked how the story flows so nicely! :)
Thank you Kinara !!!
DeleteWow if there was a prize for this, you should be getting it. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you !!! This was won by another blogger from Chennai
Deletei liked the story..
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumuk
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